User talk:French Camp

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Hi! I know you wanted to do updates in the article. However, please read Username - It is better to use a person name rather than a company name. Also, please try not to do promotional edits. Thank you WhisperToMe (talk) 19:45, 13 January 2012 (UTC)

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Now, I would like to critique your edits. Thank you, WhisperToMe (talk) 19:52, 13 January 2012 (UTC) One point you may have wanted to add was that the school was intended to serve children from troubled houses. I searched the newspaper article and found a source for that! WhisperToMe (talk) 01:09, 14 January 2012 (UTC)
 * 1. Sources need to be published. Sylvia Dickson can't be cited unless her comments are published in a newspaper, on the school website, etc. And "safe" and "comfortable" are opinions. Who says they are "safe" and "comfortable"? Who is Sylvia Dickson?
 * 2. Please do not do external links within the article body text.
 * Okay, I notice some later edits credit it to "FCA Publications Coordinator" - The information needs to be published, though WhisperToMe (talk) 00:25, 14 January 2012 (UTC)