User talk:FriendOfTheFrays

Your submission at Articles for creation: Future Finance (August 20)
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NgYShung huh? 12:04, 20 August 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
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FriendOfTheFrays (talk) 11:13, 7 October 2016 (UTC)

Hi there, I have updated the page to make it more neutral. I've added more to the company history as there have been several important developments which increase the company's relevance (e.g. lending to EU students coming to study in the UK, a launch in Germany etc.) in the UK. I've also added a section on its competitors, most notably Prodigy Finance which has it's own wikipedia page which, in my opinion, is far more biased than the page I have written. I'm trying to bring attention to the small but growing private student loans market in the UK as I think it's a space to watch. Future Finance is a key player in this respect. I've been sure to cite all my points with third party sources. Thanks

Your submission at Articles for creation: Future Finance (October 22)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SwisterTwister was:

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SwisterTwister  talk  21:17, 22 October 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Future Finance (November 12)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robert McClenon was:

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Robert McClenon (talk) 03:44, 12 November 2016 (UTC)