User talk:Fro76/Retiform purpura

Lead
Your writing is very clear. I wonder if it might be helpful to move some of the more specific language about what the lesion looks like into "Signs and Symptoms." You do a great job describing the lesion, the notes you make in parenthesis for synonyms to some of the lesion words make it easier to comprehend for people like me that don't like describing skin lesions.

In the intro it might be helpful in the intro to say generally what generally causes the disease (blood vessel damage), what the disease looks like, why people should care (sign of potentially serious underlying disease etc) Znsila (talk) 01:16, 16 October 2023 (UTC)

Causes
It seems like you are already going in this direction, but maybe a table with some common causes would be good! Znsila (talk) 01:17, 16 October 2023 (UTC)

Picture
Pictures of the lesions in the signs and symptoms section would also be helpful Znsila (talk) 01:19, 16 October 2023 (UTC)

Overall, great job! Looking forward to the finished project! Znsila (talk) 01:21, 16 October 2023 (UTC)