User talk:Frpaneloux

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I presume from your comments on Talk:Lyme disease that your are either a doctor, microbiologist or medical researcher. If so please join us at WikiProject Clinical medicine and its talk page, The doctor's mess. There are collaboration pages and a weekly Medical Collaboration of the Week article :-) David Ruben Talk 11:50, 15 May 2006 (UTC)

Lyme Disease
Your comments about this articles POV/NPOV noted. Whilst I have been involved in this article, this has mostly been with general copyediting and transfering the previous mix of reference/citation styles to a consistant cite.php Footnotes. The article is well (probably overly well) full of references. I'm not a specialist in infectious diseases, nor working in London (UK), am I working in a Lyme-epidemic area. The article does make clear what are standard conventional and wider-definition viewpoints, but I am (as previously indicated) unable to judge where conventional medical consensus is on all of this. Hence I am unable to judge the two aspects for appropriate POV inclusion which might give an overall NPOV:
 * Firstly the phrasing of the text itself
 * Secondly the balance in article space given to opposing side. So if conventionsl doctors are roughly equally split in their opinions, then a 50-50% even handiness would be about right. However if the "alternative divergent" view is a small minority, then an article within wikipedia, whilst maintaining NPOV in its description, does not have to give equal space.

It is particularly difficult to judge this given all the references given - to play devils-advocate these are stated optinions which can be cited to verify the comments made. However, of course, wikipedia is not here to debate out all and every piece of research, nor list every paper ever published on a topic. Hence, as an encyclopaedia, editors with knowledge of a field as a whole, need to help ensure a balance of significant (majority & significant minority) viewpoints and details are included (referring both to topics already included and whether any important side-issues missed, eg an article arguing over epilepsy diagnosis, cause & treatment would be remiss if restrictions on driving not also included).

So... if there are problems with an article, help to improve it by editing. I look forward to your contributions in editing the Lyme disease article and the edit summary comments explaining your steps in the process. David Ruben Talk 11:50, 15 May 2006 (UTC)