User talk:Fudymben/sandbox

Great overall start, adding picture and linked words would be great to complete your contribution. Carlapicasso (talk) 16:40, 6 April 2019 (UTC)

Good history of the word catacomb, important to note the Latin roots. I would definitely add some pictures and link some other Wikipedia pages for a more in-depth looking page. Good job!--Henrykuv (talk) 16:50, 30 March 2019 (UTC)

I think you have lots of good information here and it appears as if your citations are all good. Make sure you add the headings and titles in your sandbox to make transferring to the main page easier down the road. I would've liked to see a little more information on the grave/tomb aspect of the catacombs as it might interest the reader more than just talking about the mining aspect. Also make sure you link some words in your portion to get your work out there and associate it with other wiki articles. Casey518 (talk) 12:58, 3 April 2019 (UTC)Casey O'Connor

Rapidrider Peer Review
Overall, very good. Only thing I would add other than reaffirming Casey's comments is that quotations always go outside of the period. Add some related Wikipedia article links as well.

Regards, Rapidrider (talk) 13:20, 3 April 2019 (UTC)

I really like your layout and your organization of your work. You have some really good information about your topic. However, if you add a little bit more information and content then your page could become even better. I also think that you did a good job of your citation page as well. Robertpark1999 (talk) 14:14, 3 April 2019 (UTC)robertpark1999

Hello, Good start so far! Like how you state where your adding your information and deleting. However, just add more information within each, add more sources, and cite words to other websites to help the readers. Otherwise, good job so far! Miaeschlidt (talk) 16:13, 3 April 2019 (UTC)

This is great! Make sure to add a picture at the end! Cbettica65 (talk) 18:16, 3 April 2019 (UTC)

This is a good start! Just remember to possibly add pictures and to link words that are important. Sophieb905 (talk) 00:59, 4 April 2019 (UTC)

Don't forget headers and to link the article you are editing. you could also link words, not sure where this is going in the article along with your group members, but check to see if they are already linking words before you so you don't have to. Oliviaohearn (talk) 02:08, 4 April 2019 (UTC)

Maybe add a little more information and a picture would be cool. Fields18x (talk) 04:36, 4 April 2019 (UTC)

Great start! I think the information you included is appropriate for the chosen sections you are writing on. Awhite07 (talk) 23:13, 5 April 2019 (UTC)

Add some pictures, and some headings and some more information on the catacombs in general. Benitalukose (talk) 03:18, 6 April 2019 (UTC)Benita Lukose

Hi I think it would be nice if you were to add some headings and information in general. This is very short. Bokyung0327 (talk) 01:46, 8 April 2019 (UTC)