User talk:Fueledbylc/sandbox

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Hi, here's some thoughts on the content in your sandbox:
 * I'm really impressed with the first three paragraphs! This is a pretty technical subject but I was able to follow along very well as a non-expert. I think you presented the information very logically and clearly.
 * In Wikipedia articles, editors often do what's called "glossing" a term. The idea is that links in a sentence are nice, but the reader shouldn't be forced to click through to a link to understand the meaning of a sentence. So in addition to linking a term for readers, an editor might put a parenthetical explanation after an unfamiliar term. For example:
 * "Reporter genes used in this way are normally expressed under their own promoter independent from that of the introduced gene of interest..." can become "Reporter genes used in this way are normally expressed under their own promoter (DNA region that initiates gene transcription) independent from that of the introduced gene of interest..."
 * "Reporter genes can be used to assay for..." would be good to link and gloss assay here

This looks like a very well-polished addition to Wikipedia written by a very experienced editor. Nicely done! Let me know if you have any questions about how to move your work live! Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 03:48, 6 January 2020 (UTC)