User talk:Fujeau/sandbox

Hi peer reviewers! I do realize the section I plan to add is pretty short but I didn't want to add much more than this for fear of going too in-depth or getting sidetracked from the main idea of the "Synaptic Pruning" page. I just submitted the edit but please let me know if there's any outstanding or egregious errors or things I might want to rephrase. --Fujeau (talk) 21:47, 8 December 2020 (UTC)

Hello, I sincerely apologize for the late peer review, your edits definitely are going in the right direction! Your additions to the article contribute a lot to why synaptic pruning is significant! I feel like some sentences could be condensed slightly to up the readability of the writing as a whole. For example, the sentence "Microglia has been implicated in synaptic pruning...phagocytocis," is quite long and could be cut down to create a more digestible sentence. Overall, your edits are very good and contribute a lot to the original article! Good job! Quirkybooknerd (talk) 06:24, 9 December 2020 (UTC)