User talk:FunFactsWithJane

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Article Edit BIOG:3500
Hi. I really liked the set-up and overall wording of your article. It's very simple, professional, and informative.

Really, the only tip I can give is to add a link to Corning--most people have never heard of Corning Incorporated and it would be great for the reader to be able to click on it and then see another Wiki article or external link that briefly explains the company.

Really like to see your great list of references, good grammar, and I think the article is appropriate in length. Where you have the phrase "with better damage resistance", better is a relative term, perhaps explain it.

Otherwise go ahead and post it to Wiki!!

Kudos. FunFactsWithJane (talk) 23:29, 17 October 2018 (UTC)