User talk:Funnyjasband

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Adding reference to Wikipedia articles
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Your submission at Articles for creation
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Dear Abdullah

I can't find any other reliable source beyond Marquis WHo's WHo online. I don't know what you're trying to say.... I give it up. Since Mr.Yamaguchi's "The COmplete Thesaurus of Musical Scales" is wiidely used.... I wanted to add his info wiki. I am sure you're not a musician. So you don't need to worry about it.

http://www.masayayamaguchi.com/jej_2002.jpg

http://www.organissimo.org/forum/index.php?/topic/42028-slonimsky-thesaurus-of-scales-and-melodic-patterns/ Funnyjasband (talk) 16:09, 25 October 2012 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
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Thank you very much for your comment. The text, "Masaya Yamaguchi is not only a musician but also a conceptualist who established his own system to explore the imaginative formation of musical scales by The Complete Thesaurus of Musical Scales, which is a meta-contribution to music pedagogy of a high standard. The concept is revealed in many of his writings and compositions." is used in Marquis Who's Who in America itself.... then, Masaya Yamaguchi used it in his own homepage. Therefore, I inserted the quotation mark so that we can evade from copyright issue. Thanks in advance! Funnyjasband (talk) 00:33, 8 December 2012 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
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Thank you very much for your prompt reply. I read (and I hope I understood the guideline) and rewrote the text. The lines are:

According to his profile in Marquis Who's Who in America, Masaya Yamaguchi has been engaged in a wide range of activities, having been a musician and an educator who established his conceptualistic system to explore the imaginative formation of musical scales by The Complete Thesaurus of Musical Scales.[4]

I am trying to say the same thing as Marquis Who’s Who in America, p.5130. Marquis Who's Who 59th Edition. 2005.

If OK, please bring it to Request review at WP:AFC.

Thanks in advance!

Funnyjasband (talk) 05:46, 8 December 2012 (UTC)

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