User talk:Futxicaubo

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We're glad to have you here. However, your contribution Manel Guillen has some problems, and they need to be fixed.

The most important is that there are no references providing substantial coverage from 3rd party independent published reliable sources, print or online, but not blogs or press releases, or material derived from press releases. references to show his notability according to WP:BIO. References to his own web site, or that of his company, or an interview with him, can be used to show only the routine facts of his life, not his importance to an encyclopedia. We need newspaper or magazine articles speaking about his career. There should certainly be some for his work as a basketball referee; I would expect some on his business affairs also. Without them, the article will not stay in Wikipedia.

Second, the article is written in a thoroughly promotional manner. His name is used too often, there is an attempt at linking things that are not really Wikipedia articles such as Telefónica B2B Construction to look as if they did, he is referred to with adjectives of praise, and said to be an expert without any sources given. His importance as a businessman would come either from Mediterranean Capital Management, in which case he is notable only if it is, and there is no evidence presented of that, or a CEO of the Spanish branch of Bertelsmann Online--the CEO of the entire company would be notable, but not necessarily of a local division.

It discusses trivia, such as he, like millions of other people, have a private pilot's license. It name-drops notable people who he once played with as a youth. In short, it's a piece of PR.

I advise you to fix the problem, and do this very quickly, before the article gets nominated for deletion by a regular deletion process. The best way to do it is to source what can be properly sourced, and greatly abbreviate the remainder.  DGG ( talk ) 04:34, 11 October 2012 (UTC)