User talk:GEND2002/sandbox

Jamdun editor 2 (talk) 23:00, 2 April 2021 (UTC) So after reading through your assigned article I have a few suggestions you can make to increase the overall quality:


 * Scan through the article and correct the grammatical errors in each section of the article.
 * Flesh out a few of the minor themes focused on
 * Use appropriate sources as it relates to the prominent themes of your article. Find articles that are approved and supporting the prominent themes in the article
 * Use the correct format to reference your sources on Wikipedia I.E ref> insert reference </ref) code to reference the article for upload.

As it relates to what you've added, I like that you've expanded on the section named gender theory and languages as it is the essence of the course. Furthering the analysis of the article helps to breakdown the writer's perspective and also see how gender and language intertwine in society.Jamdun editor 2 (talk) 23:00, 2 April 2021 (UTC)