User talk:GRismanJ

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Hello GRismanJ, and welcome to Wikipedia. Your addition to ArcSight has had to be removed, as it appears to have added copyrighted material without permission from the copyright holder. While we appreciate your contributing to Wikipedia, there are certain things you must keep in mind about using information from your sources to avoid copyright or plagiarism issues here.


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It's very important that contributors understand and follow these practices, as policy requires that people who persistently do not must be blocked from editing. If you have any questions about this, you are welcome to leave me a message on my talk page. Thank you. bonadea contributions talk 19:29, 16 June 2014 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: HP Atalla (June 18)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please read the comments left by the reviewer on your submission. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved. ''' Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! '''
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Roger (Dodger67) (talk) 18:15, 18 June 2014 (UTC)
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June 2014
Please do not add promotional material to Wikipedia, as you did to TippingPoint. While objective prose about beliefs, products or services is acceptable, Wikipedia is not intended to be a vehicle for soapboxing, advertising or promotion. Thank you. bonadea contributions talk 20:13, 18 June 2014 (UTC)

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Draft:Atalla (June 18)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please read the comments left by the reviewer on your submission. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved. ''' Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! '''
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Fiddle  Faddle  21:44, 18 June 2014 (UTC)
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Your submission at Articles for creation: HP Atalla (June 26)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please read the comments left by the reviewer on your submission. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved. ''' Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! '''
 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, you can find it at Draft:HP Atalla.
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 * Please remember to link to the submission!

BethNaught (talk) 13:05, 26 June 2014 (UTC)
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Your draft article, Draft:HP Atalla


Hello GRismanJ. It has been over six months since you last edited your WP:AFC draft article submission, entitled "HP Atalla".

The page will shortly be deleted. If you plan on editing the page to address the issues raised when it was declined and resubmit it, simply and remove the  or  code. Please note that Articles for Creation is not for indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace.

If your submission has already been deleted by the time you get there, and you want to retrieve it, copy this code:, paste it in the edit box at this link , click "Save page", and an administrator will in most cases undelete the submission.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. JMHamo (talk) 12:19, 2 January 2015 (UTC)

Proposed deletion of HP Atalla


The article HP Atalla has been proposed for deletion&#32;because of the following concern:
 * Does not meet WP:CORP. Virtually no 3rd-party coverage of this company or its product.  The article reads like a pitch for investment.

While all constructive contributions to Wikipedia are appreciated, content or articles may be deleted for any of several reasons.

You may prevent the proposed deletion by removing the notice, but please explain why in your edit summary or on the article's talk page.

Please consider improving the article to address the issues raised. Removing will stop the proposed deletion process, but other deletion processes exist. In particular, the speedy deletion process can result in deletion without discussion, and articles for deletion allows discussion to reach consensus for deletion. FalconK (talk) 01:55, 3 October 2016 (UTC)