User talk:GTMorgan

July 2010
Welcome to Wikipedia. We welcome and appreciate your contributions, including your edits to Brown Berets, but we cannot accept original research. Original research also encompasses novel, unpublished syntheses of previously published material. Please be prepared to cite a reliable source for all of your information. Thank you. Jrcla2 (talk) 20:24, 21 July 2010 (UTC)

Hi, thanks for the feedback. Maybe you can help me understand a bit more about the revisions. My revision is to change the biased language in the article. My issue is with the word "American" to describe the protesters. The use of this word in this context leads the reader to believe that the Brown Berets are less American than the protesters. Can someone give me some suggestions of a change that I can make that will be more in accordance with Wikipedia's guidelines? Or is it something I should change again with different wording? GTMorgan (talk) 03:03, 22 July 2010 (UTC)