User talk:GZhen/Bloodstain pattern analysis/Jencastiel Peer Review

Hi Jencastiel, thanks you for the feedback. I did go back to reread what I wrote and I think you have a point. Some of the sentences are a bit choppy. This may be a result of me trying my best to ensure all the information was factual and in my own words. I will go back to try and inprove the flow of my additions to the article. Thank you! GZhen (talk) 21:36, 11 March 2021 (UTC)