User talk:GaHee Park

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Talk : Bowie, Texas
Bowie, Texas. It is located in Montague County. It is a small town.

Not many of people know about high school in this town. Bowie high school's mascot is Jackrabbit.

It is different like any other rabbits. It has big ears.

Your recent edits
I see you made an edit to an article and left a comment on my talk page ([http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:Piotrus&diff=prev&oldid=543424236). Good! You still need to make a comment on an article talk page, an edit in the tutorial sandbox, and add yourself to our list of students page to receive full credit. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; reply here 05:34, 12 March 2013 (UTC)
 * Yes, good job, you get full credit now for the assignment. In the future, remember to edit while logged in! --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; reply here  02:46, 13 March 2013 (UTC)

Adding a reference
In this edit, you removed which tells the Wikipedia to display inline citations. I'll go and fix it for you. This is a correct edit adding a reference. In the future you may want to experiment in the sandbox first before making a complex edit. Well done otherwise. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; reply here 15:34, 15 March 2013 (UTC)

Hello
Glad to see more contributors on Wikipedia especially helping with Korea-related articles. ^^ Jae ₩on ( Deposit ) 16:26, 24 March 2013 (UTC)

When creating new articles, please add a reference
I see you created articles like Jaechub‎ and Ari-soo. That's very good, but please add references. New, short articles without any references may be deleted! If you write an article that already exists on Korean Wikipedia, add a Interwiki link. Adding an interwiki link simple: just add a Korean name using the following code: 한양대학교 (in this example, that's the link for the Korean wiki Hanyang University article). --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; reply here 03:40, 25 March 2013 (UTC)

To do list reminder
This is a reminder that all groups have a deadline approaching. "Before Monday, April 15, you should have a plan (who will read what, who will work on what aspects of the article) in place. You should post a preliminary "to-do" list on article's discussion page and inform the instructor that you have done so. The "to do" list should consist of a list of what points you will cover in your article, how it will be structured, who will work on what sections, and a short list of resources. This list should be about one page in length if you need a yardstick. Each group member should participate in creation of that list, describing their own tasks. If the article does not exist, you should stub (start) it (see what makes a good stub and ). Note that your "to do" list is not a proper stub, a stub is a mini-article, not a "to do" list. If you create a new article with a "to do" list, it will be deleted! On the bright side, a stub does not have to be long - few sentences plus a source is enough. Finishing this assignment on time is worth 5% of the course grade.. ". See Wikipedia:School_and_university_projects/User:Piotrus/Spring_2013 for more details. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; reply here 04:33, 10 April 2013 (UTC)

Starting a new article
User:GaHee Park/sandbox is a good start, through it would be even better to do it in a new, dedicated sandbox, such as /Beautiful store. It would also be very helpful to add a reference; a reviewer is likely to decline a new article without any references. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; reply here 13:50, 11 April 2013 (UTC)

Your logged out edits
I see, is you. Ok, thanks for telling me that, those are good edits! --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; reply here 14:33, 14 April 2013 (UTC)

Beautiful Store
Hi. I'm sorry that the article had to be deleted, but it did not meet our guidelines. Please have a look at Advertising to learn more. Deb (talk) 10:17, 21 April 2013 (UTC)
 * I am looking into this, and will give you an extension of several days for any passed deadlines. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; reply here 11:04, 21 April 2013 (UTC)

I have asked or a review of deletion at Deletion_review/Log/2013_April_21, but a number of other editors express the same two concerns: that the tone of the article is non-neutral (promotional, advertising), and that the grammar is so poor it is almost impossible to understand the article. While I think that the article is not so bad, I am afraid that the community consensus is clear. The article is still available for your group editing at User:GaHee Park/sandbox. You should focus on improving the grammar, and neutrality. I highly recommend you show it to your English teacher(s), and ask for their help. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; reply here 12:51, 21 April 2013 (UTC)


 * I expect that you will read the comments at the deletion review. You will need to improve the grammar, but also remove parts that consist primarily of advertising buzzwords (한국어). Let me know if you'd have any questions, I can meet with your group this week to explain this in more detail. PS. Also, please read CORP. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; reply here 03:03, 22 April 2013 (UTC)

Beautiful Store sources
Hi, I have been doing some searching for English-language sources for your Beautiful Store article, and I found a few that might be useful to you... I hope that helps. -- Boing! said Zebedee (talk) 13:33, 21 April 2013 (UTC)
 * http://www.beautifulstore.org/Eng/
 * http://www.beautifulfund.org/eng/sub07/04.jsp
 * http://avantageventures.com/avcatalogue/sv-%E7%BE%8E%E4%B8%BD%E5%B0%8F%E5%BA%97
 * http://www.asiaone.com/Business/News/SME%2BCentral/Story/A1Story20110202-261677.html
 * http://www.korea4expats.com/service-Beautiful-Store-Resale-Shop-Seoul-769.html
 * http://www.travelwireasia.com/2009/08/life-in-korea-the-beautiful-store-salvation-army-and-other-thrift-stores/
 * http://koreajoongangdaily.joinsmsn.com/news/article/Article.aspx?aid=2961055
 * http://www.makechange.tv/videos/bonvoyage-e30-ases-nonprofit-and-social-enterprise-beautiful-store-south-korea
 * http://tm.koreaherald.com/view.php?ud=20121109000666
 * http://www.oki.com/en/press/2013/01/z12109e.html
 * http://nwww.koreaherald.com/view.php?ud=20121109000590&mod=skb

thank you for the sources!!! ;)

Outline
Beautiful Store is significant that the a recycled used the birthplace of the civil rights movement was attempted for the first time in the Republic of Korea. Oxfam became a the decisive pioneering model of this beautiful store. Oxfam occurred revenue by selling the old stuff to use in the third world poverty relief and social support. Oxfam store has more than 820 stores throughout Europe, the proceeds of the huge investment for the poor and disabled, migrant workers. January 5, 2003, nearly 1 billion won in sales were recorded in two months, the first goal was supposed to share 10% of the sales achieved. December 26, the first beneficiaries of the group was found. Oxfam (Oxfam) were set for the banner that connect people and through the re-use of the goods, as a model, since the 'Beautiful Store' name was set. On October 17, 2002, Non-profit organizations that are independently operated under the Beautiful Foundation, June 9, 2008, the Ministry of Public Administration and Security jurisdiction was an independent non-profit corporation to the 'Foundation Beautiful Store'. From the beginning, the beautiful store accepts donated used items such as old clothes, books, bags, shoes, kitchenware, appliances, decorative trim volunteers, and was to be distributed to the stores. In the store, both the volunteers and the buyer is called as an angel. Based on this voluntary self-induced to be a boon to the community, and even larger focal point. These activities is to realize the connection of people and through the re-use of the goods, the core values of Oxfam. Beautiful Store is derived from the mesh of the net and net connection is called as the spirit of the mesh. The spirit of the beautiful store waking psychiatric mesh from the environmental movement and the public interest to run our own neighbors, the notion that you can give to charity. If you have any difficulties warehousing storage or damaging the appearance of large furniture, shall be excluded from items donated.Sujinkim (talk) 13:38, 21 April 2013 (UTC)

Your recent edits
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Lee So-yeon (actress)
I saw your edits to Lee So-yeon (actress). Do you like doing edits to actor/actress pages? If you want to do more of these edits, I would like to recommend some. Many of these pages don't have the Korean name or hanja. If you look at Yoon Chan or Ahn Jae-wook you can see his Korean name in the infobox. You can see and copy the module for adding hangul and hanja to other infoboxes. If working on actor/actress pages interests you, here is a good page to look at; List of South Korean actors. Thanks for your work and let me know if you have questions. ₪Rick n Asia₪ 16:42, 21 April 2013 (UTC)

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Beautiful Store
I will try to help you understand my position. Within wikipedia, there is a lot of work to do, and different people have different roles. I am an administrator and one of my duties is to make sure that articles do not appear in the encyclopedia until they are ready. That means it is my job to delete articles that don't meet the guidelines. User:Piotrus has a different role. He chose to involve himself in your project and to mentor you. That means that he should have checked your article to make sure it met the guidelines before it was moved into article space. Until you have your articles checked and corrected by a more experienced contributor, you should leave them in your sandbox. If you had left the article there, it would not have been deleted. You were given this advice by Piotrus, but you did not follow it. I appreciate that you are trying to complete a school project, but Wikipedia is an encyclopedia, and it must meet certain standards of correctness, otherwise it would be no use to readers. Deb (talk) 13:47, 22 April 2013 (UTC)

Hi, and thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia. It appears that you tried to give Beautiful Store a different title by copying its content and pasting either the same content, or an edited version of it, into another page with a different name. This is known as a "cut and paste move", and it is undesirable because it splits the page history, which is legally required for attribution. Instead, the software used by Wikipedia has a feature that allows pages to be moved to a new title together with their edit history.

In most cases, once your account is four days old and has ten edits, you should be able to move an article yourself using the "Move" tab at the top of the page. This both preserves the page history intact and automatically creates a redirect from the old title to the new. If you cannot perform a particular page move yourself this way (e.g. because a page already exists at the target title), please follow the instructions at requested moves to have it moved by someone else. Also, if there are any other pages that you moved by copying and pasting, even if it was a long time ago, please list them at Cut and paste move repair holding pen. User:GaHee Park/sandbox HaeYoon (talk) 10:59, 6 May 2013 (UTC)

Beautiful Store now in mainspace
Your article Beautiful Store has been restored to its latest version; I and others have made some cleanup edits to help you get started. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; reply here 03:36, 8 May 2013 (UTC)

Hello from Konyang
Hello, GaHee Park.

Welcome to Wikipedia. I am a professor at Konyang University in Nonsan. I am having one of my classes learn about Wikipedia and edit in it.

kim@konyang.ac.kr Kdammers (talk) 10:41, 12 May 2013 (UTC)

Keep editing :)
This is a reminder that editing Wikipedia also gives you extra credits for our course. Please ping me on talk if you make edits you would like me to consider for extra credit. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; reply here 10:12, 26 June 2013 (UTC)

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Proposed deletion of Bab burger
Hello, GaHee Park. I wanted to let you know that I’m proposing an article that you started, Bab burger, for deletion because I don't think it meets our criteria for inclusion. If you don't want the article deleted:


 * 1) edit the page
 * 2) remove the text that looks like this:
 * 3) save the page

Also, be sure to explain why you think the article should be kept in your edit summary or on the article's talk page. If you don't do so, it may be deleted later anyway.

You can leave a note on my talk page if you have questions. -  Blanchardb -Me•MyEars•MyMouth- timed 16:52, 29 September 2013 (UTC)


 * Reminder: Your article will be deleted shortly if you don't act. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; reply here 06:34, 4 October 2013 (UTC)

Nomination of Bab burger for deletion
A discussion is taking place as to whether the article Bab burger is suitable for inclusion in Wikipedia according to Wikipedia's policies and guidelines or whether it should be deleted.

The article will be discussed at Articles for deletion/Bab burger until a consensus is reached, and anyone is welcome to contribute to the discussion. The nomination will explain the policies and guidelines which are of concern. The discussion focuses on high-quality evidence and our policies and guidelines.

Users may edit the article during the discussion, including to improve the article to address concerns raised in the discussion. However, do not remove the article-for-deletion notice from the top of the article. ---  Blanchardb -Me•MyEars•MyMouth- timed 05:51, 22 October 2013 (UTC)
 * Why aren't you joining the discussion, GaHee? --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; reply here 02:56, 28 October 2013 (UTC)

A barnstar for you!
Hello GaHee! Your article Bab burger was redirected to rice burger at the end of this discussion, because it seemed like the two articles covered the same topic. Is that right, or does bab burger refer to something different? Either way, thank you for your work on Wikipedia, and remember that you're welcome to contribute to rice burger if you notice that it's missing anything. If you have any questions, I'm happy to answer them - just leave a note at my talk page. Thanks again! --Cerebellum (talk) 14:22, 30 October 2013 (UTC)

Images
File:Introduction of sharing project - The 5 principle.jpg, File:Introduction of sharing project - Standard process.JPG, File:Introduction of sharing project - Standard process2.JPG, File:Introduction of sharing project - The enterprise of Beautiful Store by subjects.JPG and File:Introduction of sharing project - The enterprise of Beautiful Store by subjects2.JPG need a clarification of source. Are they created by you? Or did you find them on a website? Also, they need a category, I suggest commons:Category:Diagrams in English. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; reply here 02:19, 11 November 2013 (UTC)

Those are all created by me. Actually I found out the information and I recreated it --GaHee Park (talk) 16:18, 11 November 2013 (UTC)

Wiki edits
Please don't forget your weekly (and project) edits; our course is still going on (in cyberspace). Keep up the good job! --<sub style="border:1px solid #228B22;padding:1px;">Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; reply here 07:23, 10 December 2013 (UTC)

HEN IS THE DUE Date for the final edits? Could you extend the time,please?
 * Due date: you still have about two weeks. Please remind me (by posting on my talk page) which article(s) are you developing for our Sociology of Globalization class. Thanks! --<sub style="border:1px solid #228B22;padding:1px;">Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; reply here 08:16, 16 December 2013 (UTC)

I am really SORRY!!!!! have you seen e-mails I have sent you?? I will definitely finish the both projects!!!!! by early today. I am working on it. then could you PLEASE upgrade my current grade?? thank you so much and sorry to bother you. --GaHee Park (talk) 03:37, 26 December 2013 (UTC)

I am sorry I wish I could read Korean better to understand what's going on. Can you give me WP:DIFF to your edits where you are adding the content that's getting removed? Information from en wiki can be described as such in the edit summary. --<sub style="border:1px solid #228B22;padding:1px;">Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; reply here 10:17, 30 December 2013 (UTC)

It has been deleted so I cannot show you WP:DIFF so I will create the page again and will send it to you. By the way, have you checked the article for Globalization class link I sent you? is it all right?? --GaHee Park (talk) 10:49, 30 December 2013 (UTC)

editing Hanok
Hello, I am the other member editing article Hanok. Since there were some grammatically incorrect, I tried to fix it this time. could you check it all kindly? It is hard to translate all, however we have been doing this so hard. There are some words or sentences you might not understand without traditional experiment. Actually it was kind of difficult to understand for me in Korean because there were some complicated words I had never seen. So I had to look up the words from other encyclopedia. Hope you answer me back. Sincerely GaHee Park and happy new year! --GaHee Park (talk) 17:54, 30 December 2013 (UTC)


 * Hello GaHee Park, I'm glad you're open to discussion of these edits. I have reviewed the recent addition and unfortunately, much of the translated material isn't ready for an English-language encyclopedia. This goes beyond "grammatically incorrect": phrases such as "Paleolithic stayed in the cave or made temporary house", "Anglicanism, Catholic tried to be naturalized", "many other places try to follow the designs like hanok's gentility such as in public places;bathroom, signs and even private places;cafe" and "they aware hanok as an old day's antiquated and inefficient architecture and demolished down so lots of hanok's historical value has been dissappeared" are especially problematic. The words are English, but the meaning is indecipherable; I can't tell you the proper English translation because I don't understand the sentences (I should mention you might not understand without traditional experiment isn't exactly clear, either). The best way to proceed is to ask the Korean-to-English specialists for help, found here: click this link.
 * Is this for a class assignment? I hope you understand your edits aren't being discounted completely (we need experts from all over the world!) but it's very difficult to ascertain the value of a contribution unless the meaning is clear. I may need to have a word with your instructor. Let's keep working on it. Blackguard  21:13, 30 December 2013 (UTC)

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