User talk:Gabbym9903/sandbox/Edit 3

6/18/2019 Evaluation by DrMichaelWright
DrMichaelWright (talk) 12:11, 18 June 2019 (UTC)

It does not look like you put much thought or effort into this.
 * Points: 29/40
 * Grade: 72.5%

Spelling/Grammar
Nearly meets standard.
 * "...Stradivarius and Guarneri..." keep your Latin or Italian consistent. One or the other.
 * "...has been known with these..." for.
 * "...the expanding pace of the city...." pace?
 * "...its steal production..." Steal, as opposed to steel production? Do you mean there is a lot of criminals making livings with theft? :-)
 * "...and uses u a lot...."

Language
Does not meet standard. "...staying at the negative side as the country massively exports to France and Germany." What does this even mean?
 * "...these fine violins..."; "...and distinguished excellence..." Please use neutral language, rather than tourist-pamphlet language.
 * Why do you call it the "Po Food Valley", rather than Po Valley?
 * "...and a variety of trails and natural areas one could explore." Wikipedia should not read like a tourist pamphlet.
 * Much of this is written in such a way that betrays a lack of understanding by the writer.

Organization
Nearly meets standard.
 * Since there is already an architecture section on the Cremona article, the one under economy, you should probably call your "architecture" section 'tourism' instead.

Coding
Nearly meets standard.
 * There are no wikilinks to other relevant Wikipedia articles.

Validity
Nearly meets standard.
 * "Due to its ancient history, associated with the Holy Roman Empire" If you mean 'ancient history', then it should be the Roman Empire. The Holy Roman Empire was a medieval and early-modern institution.

Completion
Meets standard.

Relevance
Nearly meets standard.
 * Many of the things written are unstructured facts, rather than well-considered statements about the topic at hand.