User talk:Gabrielajorrin

Welcome!
Hello, Gabrielajorrin, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Peer Review Assignment - Feedback
Hello Gabriela, I am happy to be here and collaborate with your task this semester. I enjoyed reading your edit post, and I think it would potentially add significant insight to the article. I also noticed that you cited several sources for making your sentences reliable, and I think they are useful because they show different perspectives on your argument, which is incredible. However, it may be useful to organize your information a little better. I found some words I would say repetitive. Try to use different transition signals to express your thoughts so that the text will flow concisely. Finally, I think it would be good if the last sentence were moved to the top because, in my view, it seems to be an introduction to your short paragraph.Jackson Dutra (talk) 02:55, 17 October 2020 (UTC)

Peer Review Reply
Thanks, Jackson! Appreciate the feedback and I will definitely take your notes into account!