User talk:Gabrielasgarcia/sandbox

Carissa's peer review
Hi Gabriela, it seems like you were able to figure out the problems you were having with your Sandbox, which is great! Here are some of my thoughts:


 * It looks like you are missing some citations, but this may be another technical issue that you already know about and have been working on.
 * I like that your introduction section briefly talks about estrogen in general before you talk about how estrogen relates to behavior in more detail for the majority of the section.
 * This is just a personal preference, but I would write "Sexual behavior and sexual desire" (including the information you have on lordosis) and "Mental health" as two different subsections instead of as bullet points.
 * I think the image you included on lordosis is perfect, especially since it is a concept that the average person probably would not be familiar with before reading the article. I think the bullet point you have following the image is meant to be a caption for the figure and, if so, it does a great job summarizing what is happening at each of the numbered parts of the picture.

Overall, I'm really impressed with what you have. Like I said, I think you did a good job presenting information on estrogen that is related to behavior while also including a summary of estrogen in general. You also clearly differentiated the information that relates to males versus females and humans versus animal models. I think the only thing left to do would be to make sure everything in your article section is cited.

Carissa92 (talk) 22:06, 29 April 2019 (UTC)