User talk:Gabriellam19/sandbox

One thing you note in your changes is that there is a film, but the next section also says that. I wasn't sure if repeat information is ok but thought id bring it to your attention. I think you also do a wonderful job of flowing your ideas through the reception section. You said you needed to cite sources so obviously that's the next step but also I wasn't sure if this was a complete addition, or if you were removing sections or where this was going. I'm not sure if this might be too challenging, but also I think your point about intended audience is really important. I think flushing that section out with another couple sentences would really help. In the background section the second sentence kind of seems very long, and might sound better if you break it up into two sentences. Also I don't know what's necessarily belonging in the background section of a book but I think the section you added about the transformation to a diplomat in her home country could be better suited into the reception section. Mostly just because it seems like a cause and effect. Bms141 (talk) 19:05, 15 April 2019 (UTC)bms141