User talk:Gabyal1133/sandbox

Nicole's peer review: The sections are logical and well-balanced, and the topic is approached in a logical way; great neutral voice; Suggestions: Put lead before table of contents, and maybe try to add a broader overview of the topic in the lead-> Why it matters Maybe try to define some more of the scientific words you use throughout the article;
 * Incomplete sentences under subheadings Liaoning Province, China and Ontario, Canada;

Danica's peer review questions:

1)Well organized

2)Briefly explain what GIS and rafter graph is after their hyperlink-- I think most users would not know what those things are

3)clarify terms that regular users may not understand

4)forgot about hyperlinks-- will now add them to my own article