User talk:Gabyflores27/sandbox/Hedwig Codex

The page is organized and easy to look over and read; however its sparse in some areas if there is not a lot of information it might be better to combine areas together. The lead section is light and to the point describing the codex in question. The outline structure flows well and makes sense. The information given is not bias giving a good idea about the topics displayed in the outline. So far so good other than it seems that some areas were given more attention than others. Laughsassin (talk) 19:08, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

Taking another look at your article got me thinking you could just put the Commission are with the Provenance and even add in the Medieval Period with Provenance since they talk about the same things, it would clean up the smaller ares and make it seem more built and complete. In the Design area there is little there other than a small sentence, adding more about how it looks on the outside is one way you can create more substance to that particular area or even elaborating upon images inside such as boarders around text and images could be part of the design. Laughsassin (talk) 20:25, 8 April 2020 (UTC)