User talk:Gage Thulin/Mathew "Bones" Hooks

Peer Review
Gage, you have a ton of great facts on Bones, and I think you did a great job of organizing it all down, and really showing why this guy should be someone that's on a wikipedia page. One thing I will say is that in your body paragraph, you start sentences with he also, and he also, and you should just add his name, it sounds a little better, and try to use better transition words with that. Brady.timm2 (talk) 01:45, 25 April 2024 (UTC)