User talk:Gait123

Wonderful job
Hi Gait123. I only wanted to say that you have created a great article in only a few days. I have been a major contributor in the Parkinson's disease and Signs and symptoms of Parkinson's disease articles so I can appreciate the effort. If you need any help or have any doubts feel free to ask. You might also find interesting the medicine project (See WP:MED), where editors interested in improving medicine articles meet and collaborate.

I only wanted to point a few minor issues:

The first one is regarding your user page: it is very akward to put a redirect in your user page that goes to an article page. This may lead to some confusion. It would be a good idea if you eliminated the redirect since user pages are intended to give some info on you (if you want). If you are not really interested in saying much an alternative possibility to the redirect would be to simply add a line similar to "I mainly collaborate in the Parkinsonian Gait article."

The second issue is regarding references: Your article is referenced to high quality references in peer-reviewed journals which is great. Nevertheless you my find useful to read the medicine articles politics on sources for medical articles (See: Reliable sources (medicine-related articles)). In summary it says that reviews are preferred to primary articles. The article may be further improved with this kind of references (Nevertheless as I have said references are a strong point of the article).

Finally you may have noticed in the Parkinson's disease article that most references have a standard format. This format is almost a standard to all medical articles in wikipedia. It comes as the output of an online tool and you would probably find it really useful since it saves a lot of time. It is | diberri's tool and you simply have to add the pubmed number of an article into the tool and paste the output in your article to obtain a perfectly formatted reference.

Well... I hope you find useful my comments. Best regards and happy editing.--Garrondo (talk) 07:04, 9 May 2010 (UTC)