User talk:GalaticPanda/Harriet Boyd Hawes/Plantnoob Peer Review

1. Lead Could more detail be added to the introduction? Other than that it gives a short and sweet explanation about Harriet's impact.

2. Clarity The article is organized well. Could the "Later Life and Legacy" section be organized in paragraph form as the other sections are?

3. Balance Yes, I think the career section is appropriate in length for the article topic.

4. Neutrality Writing is neutral and only discusses factual occurrences.

5. Sources Could sources be added to the "war nursing" and the first few paragraphs in the "Academic Career section"?