User talk:Galekarens

Kathryn Janeway
Please stop reverting the Kathryn Janeway article, as you did with your edits here, here and here. Stating that Janeway rejoined Starfleet as an admiral sufficiently conveys the information. Adding "again" makes the sentence read poorly, and is redundant, since the article already established that she was an admiral, and there is no reason why a reader would assume that her rank would be any different upon her return. Please stop reverting it. Thank you. Nightscream (talk) 21:36, 4 November 2012 (UTC)

Oh ha, that's doesn't make sense, she could have been demoted, so saying "again" makes perfect sense. Whoever you are, your opinion is just that, sorry.


 * There is no reason to assume a demotion. Even if there were, the word "again" is redundant. "Rejoins Starfleet as an admiral" conveys the information in a sufficiently straightforward manner. Even if it weren't, placing the word "again" where you did ("as again an admiral") is poor writing. If you think that's just one person's opinion, then you obviously don't know how to write coherent sentences, and should reconsider whether contributing to an encyclopedia is within your abilities. If you don't believe me, go ahead and show that passage to any English teacher or writer. Nightscream (talk) 06:15, 5 November 2012 (UTC)