User talk:Galvinopinion

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The language you are using at the Markos Moulitsas article does not conform with NPOV. You cannot use language like "callous comments" or "incendiary rhetoric". Guettarda 18:12, 3 January 2006 (UTC)
 * While this is an improvement on the original version, it is still not NPOV (for example, "his fellow Americans" is editorialising) and it's unsourced - statements need to be referenced. Your should also refrain from incivil edit summaries.  Guettarda 20:23, 3 January 2006 (UTC)
 * Actually the whole thing is far from acceptable - "gloated"? "Had to account for"?  This language does not conform to NPOV.  Guettarda 20:27, 3 January 2006 (UTC)
 * Your revision to the lead on the Mel Reynolds article wasn't much better. Probably more debatable, but I'd guess connecting the Lewinsky scandal to the pardon doesn't conform to NPOV either. Drjayphd 21:13, 2 October 2006 (UTC)