User talk:Gaoy53/Legal remedy

Summary of Article Outlook
To improve the quality of this article, I would start by providing a more accurate and inclusive definition of legal or judicial remedies, which address their functions and applications. In the introduction, I would summarize the main contents of the article, specifically the types of legal remedies and how they are applied differently in the legal systems of the United States, European states, and United Kingdom. The article briefly explains the differences among three types of judicial remedies, which are legal, equitable, and declaratory remedies. In addition to building on these short explanations, I will include specific examples of these three types of judicial remedies and provide details of prominent cases in regards to legal remedies if applicable. Moreover, in order to provide a world view of the issue on judicial remedies, I seek to compare how the U.S., European countries, and U.K. are using and applying the concept differently. I will be incorporating research that investigate these three parts of the world, in terms of what judicial remedies are available, the cases that they apply to, and the severity of their enforcements.

A major improvement required for this article is to include information on traditional judicial remedies that aim at lessening the impact of pretrial publicity. Pretrial publicity can severely damage a criminal defendant' right to receive a fair trial guaranteed by the Sixth Amendment, so judicial remedies are tools for judges to eliminate the effects of pretrial publicity. There are six types of trail-level remedies for pretrial publicity, which are voir dire, change of venue, change of veniremen, continuance, admonition, and sequestration. I will describe each of these remedies in my own words and give examples of legal cases in which certain types of judicial remedies are used. Currently, this article lacks sufficient amount of reliable sources as well. I would edit this article based on additional academic sources so that its quality enhances.

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Overall: This is a ton of work, a huge improvement, a bunch of new references and something you should proud of. This looks great! Yay!

You should take a look at this list of suggestions for polishing your article which is a helpful set of ideas from. Many won't apply but some might. I've gone through and made a few edits to your articles to clean things up—mostly small stylistic things but there are definitely more. Look at the history to see what I've done before so you get a sense and feel free to make more edits like this.

In any case, do a pass or two to address things on the list on our website that apply and that you think will be helpful and/or improve the article. Then go ahead and make it live. Good work! — m a k o ๛  05:14, 14 February 2020 (UTC)