User talk:Garberk1/sandbox

Edit By Poli
Your sources are credible sources. The page is outlined and organized and well put together. Looking at the fishing page on wikipedia page that already exists there was not a lot of information about different forms of fishing. These things that you add will improve the page and have more information about the different forms of fishing.

NinaRose (Fishing)
Hello, I like the topic you picked. I would say you need to add a little bit more information to every topic of fishing your talking about. So add a little bit to fresh water fishing, salt water fishing, history of fishing, and traditional fishing. I know there is probably more information on the history parts because fishing does go so far back. Also when you add more information, don't forget to add more citations

You have good sources. Utilize these sources to add more context into the things that you're talking about. You organized this very well, just make sure to fix mechanical errors and to add more information to establish more of the credibility that you already have.