User talk:Gargey

Your submission at AfC Chaudhary Harmohan Singh Yadav (August 8)
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Footnoting needed at Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Chaudhary Harmohan Singh Yadav
Hello, your draft is getting better and better, and it's very important that you added more references. However, you have simply listed the references at the bottom, so the reader has no idea which news articles verify which facts about Singh. Please take it to the next step, and turn those links into proper WP:Footnotes so that it is very clear to a reader which article corresponds to which portions of the article. Also, note I left you a small question in bolded letters in the first paragraph, asking for clarification on one point.

Please address the footnoting issue, in order to get your draft approved. MatthewVanitas (talk) 14:48, 14 August 2013 (UTC)


 * This is a great improvement, we are nearly ready. I have left some comments at the top of the article of a few things to fix. Once you finish that, we are within one or two drafts of publishing the article. Please contact me on my Talk page if you have any questions, or when you are ready for me to review it again. MatthewVanitas (talk) 19:03, 16 August 2013 (UTC)

Your submission at AfC Chaudhary Harmohan Singh Yadav was accepted
 Chaudhary Harmohan Singh Yadav, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. . Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! MatthewVanitas (talk) 13:44, 29 August 2013 (UTC)
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