User talk:Garnellon/sandbox

Keith Garber
Add more citations and make it more in third person not second person.

Edit by Poli
I think you should take out the comments about how well film critics do because its more of your opinion. Just having the amount of money that they make is good information. Maybe have more information on some film critics and why they became one. The sections were organized and easy to find. Adding more sources will make it more validating.