User talk:Garrett William Vogel

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Uvas Reservoir feedback from Julian: - 2nd sentence: change "district" to "District" - 3rd sentence: "May 2015" incomplete. - Citations outside punctuation. - References don't each need a new line; citations can refer to the same reference. - Remove comma in 3rd paragraph: "thwarted his development aspirations with running a..." - It's confusing who the owner is, Santa Clara Valley Water District or the Scoffones. Please clarify. - If you have any info from SCVWD on the types and locations of uses of the water, please include. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Julianfulton (talk • contribs) 23:24, 15 May 2015 (UTC)