User talk:Garrettmu18

Welcome!
Hello, Garrettmu18, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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My comment on my page:  ... I'm not sure if I am suppose to site a picture if I got the picture from the Wiki Commons?? Garrettmu18 (talk) 21:34, 5 February 2016 (UTC)

Feedback
Nice work on your article draft. However, I noticed that you have hard-coded your numbered references. This won't work in the long term - reference systems like that are almost impossible to maintain as different people contribute to the article. Please convert them to inline references - the Cite tool (on the toolbar in Visual Editor) makes well-formatted references.

One other thing - not everything in the article is clearly connected with a source. Before merging your additions with the mainspace article, please make sure that everything you add is supported by a citation, and that everything can be tied to the appropriate source. Right now, you have some paragraphs that lack any citations, and some that lack a reference at the end. While the source might be present elsewhere in the section, there's no way for the reader to know for certain. And as the article continues to grow as others people add to it, things like that can become more problematic. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 04:47, 10 April 2016 (UTC)