User talk:Garsidem2020

I think that, in order to make this page more effective, the language could've been more concise. What I mean by this is that the author could've spaced out the bolded terms so that the paragraphs didn't seem so clouded with an overload of information. I like the sequence of information, or in other words, the specific topics that are addressed in the article, but I feel like there weren't enough of them; the topics were broad, so more information was packed into the topics, which may have caused the reader to have a harder time digesting all of the information.