User talk:Gashar823/sandbox

Peer Review
The information provided clearly addressed the topic at hand and did so in an informative and unbiased manner. It is evident that the work used was your own wording on the information you read. The only suggestion I have would be to expand on the foundation that you already. Also, I think it would be interesting if you chose a few female historians who have contributed to your topic and maybe do some background information on them as well as their contributions to the cause. Overall, great job!!

Plan
I plan to add information from an additional source into my Wikipedia article. I also am going to expand on my section about women historians and thinkers by making a subsection about one or two famous feminist historians and /or thinkers and talk about their contributions to women's and gender history and studies. My next step will be finding another gender history-related article to help build and add to my existing rough draft, and to fins sources with information about a few well known feminist thinkers and historians. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Gashar823 (talk • contribs) 18:41, 19 March 2019 (UTC)

Feedback on draft
Grace: This looks like a good summary, but it's difficult to know exactly because there aren't any citations or indications of where the information is coming from. Make sure that you pull (relevant) specific information and arguments from the sources, and then cite them within your writing. Mbrzycki (talk) 19:14, 20 March 2019 (UTC)