User talk:Gavin.nast

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Per your request, I have reviewed your sandbox article. I like it. It covers a topic that is not covered elsewhere on Wikipedia. It is well referenced. There are a few grammatical and stylistic nitpicks I could point out (such as a tense error in the sentence "Despite the prohibition, illegal casinos have still been functioning" -- since the prohibition is no longer in effect, the proper tense for this sentence should be "Despite the prohibition, illegal casinos still functioned") but overall, an excellent article. I'd say publish it. WikiDan61 ChatMe!ReadMe!! 15:10, 16 November 2011 (UTC)
 * Thank you very much for your help and your nitpick! :) Gavin.nast (talk) 13:08, 17 November 2011 (UTC)