User talk:Gazal world/Koi Pan Ek Phool Nu Naam Bolo To

Copy-edit
Hi. Hope, you are keeping well. Could you paraphrase 'Reception' section of this article? I have put direct quotation of the reviewers. Need to convert them into indirect speech with copy-editing. The first two quotes (Baradi) are just two different version of the same Gujarati-language quote. Can you prepare a third wiki-suitable version from both of them? Thanks. --Gazal world (talk) 20:41, 20 September 2020 (UTC)
 * I've tried my hand at it, and if that is not 'sausage-factory' (comic English for 'satisfactory', I'll get back to it. Let me know. No problem.Nishidani (talk) 21:12, 20 September 2020 (UTC)
 * Thanks you Nishi. It will work, I think. But, Shekhdiwala's quote is still difficult to understand for me, certainly because of my poor knowledge of English. Could you re-try on it when you get free. --Gazal world (talk) 22:25, 20 September 2020 (UTC)
 * It's hard to paraphrase because words like 'concerns' and 'involvements' are not specified, and, unless one is familiar with the actual play, remain unclear. I've given it another go. The device of a play within a play was made famous by Shakespeare, who deploys it in Hamlet, and historical criticism reads that as implying a third level, the audience itself being implicated. Shakespeare of course was God, and did a slightly better job of taking human form than the chap who preceded him in the deity's incarnations on this side of the globe.Nishidani (talk) 21:54, 21 September 2020 (UTC)