User talk:Gb825

Welcome!
Hello, Gb825, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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 * Thank you so much for reaching out to me I really appreciate it! If I have any questions, I'll be sure to let you know! Gb825 (talk) 18:22, 17 September 2019 (UTC)

Response
Hi! Sorry for the late reply! It looks like is your Wikipedia Expert for the class, but here's my feedback:

Offhand I think you're doing well, but make sure that you try to avoid being repetitive with words. For example, you use the word "however" at the beginning of two sentences in a row. You also want to make sure to avoid writing something like it's original research - the term "however" can sometimes come across this way if you're not careful. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 11:09, 20 November 2019 (UTC)

No worries about the late reply! Also, thank you for your advice and thank you for clarifying who my Wikipedia Expert is! Gb825 (talk) 21:20, 21 November 2019 (UTC)