User talk:Gbarajas/Anna Tsouhlarakis

The lead of the article is straight-forward and talks about the artist and her art style. I would add another sentence explaining her art style a bit more, emphasize she does not do traditional work. In the paragraphs mention why she does not like doing traditional work and why she is trying to break the stereotypes of art, find examples of how she had been successful in this. I recommend a subheading explaining what she is doing now and current events in her life since I know she is still creating art. Add more to her personal life. Check your grammar, you can also improve your word choices such as “got” to “received” under Education. I found a few words that were misspelled, so make sure to check your spelling before you put the article live, I recommend using Grammarly. You are also missing a few commas in your sentences. Some of your sources are not available (https://www.si.edu/newsdesk/releases/works-renowned-contemporary-native-artists-national-museum-american-indian-new-york-june-2) and I could not gain access to them. Also, I was not able to figure out how to find your second book resource. Make sure all your resources are easily accessible to the reader. Good job on keeping your article neutral and not emphasizes that she is an amazing artist. I love how your paragraphs are not long at all, it is very convenient to read and does not feel overwhelming. Have you tried looking for the artist' social media, maybe you can contact her and have her answer a few questions, to strengthen your article? I found this website that may or not may be helpful (http://naveeks.com) A few more facts about your artist and some revisions, and I think your article is good to go! Good job, I hope you found my review a bit helpful. Don’t stress out too much.