User talk:Gbarton1732/sandbox

I think this is a good start to a wiki article about someone's life! I clearly understood who this person was by the first sentence, and that helped me understand the rest of the article. Your article was also really easy to read which I appreciate. I think from what I see, the coverage is pretty balanced and neutral. I'd want to see the sources in your article so I can't check them to see if they're reliable. I'd expand it, because it feels like a lot of details about this person's life are missing.

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Hi there! This looks great! I like the clear structure that you have for each section and the information about her activism is really great and easy to read and understand. I do wish that I knew more about black mesa. I'm not sure how much information is out there on the googles but i'm super intrigued by that history and it would be awesome to find more information to add to your wiki page. Great work! chianyadri