User talk:Gcneu/sandbox

- Lead does a good job introducing the topic in once concise sentence

- Good links to other background articles (helpful for people who might not know much about the topic or who want a an idea of where active immunotherapy fits in with cancer therapy as a whole.         - Add link for immunomodulators

- Overall the article is clear and concise but needs more information - examples of specific vaccines - more on antibody or CTL response - Is active immunotherapy used outside of cancer, if so, for what? - Section that addresses the difference between specific and non specific, their effectiveness in studies, treatment risks, why one would be used instead of the other