User talk:Gcordova1/Instagrams effect on physical fitness

Draft
This is kind of a draft. Are you developing a new article or improving an existing article? Cite sources in the draft. Organize the draft - - sections/headings/ etc. Keep going! ProfHanley (talk) 17:45, 17 October 2023 (UTC)

Hey! I reviewed you article if you want to take a look — Preceding unsigned comment added by Vgs0208 (talk • contribs) 22:11, 24 October 2023 (UTC)

Draft II
This is starting to look good. I think the main thing now - - before you start "sprucing up" - - is to edit your prose - - eliminate grammatical/usage errors and sentences that seem to repeat. Also, go back and brush up on how to cite sources on Wikipedia - - there's no need to introduce information with tags like "Elena says" or "an article by Smith says." Just report the information and cite appropriately. ProfHanley (talk) 17:21, 6 November 2023 (UTC)

Draft III
Okay. . this is looking better. Read through carefully and make line edits - - for spelling, punctuation, etc. Once you've cleaned up the prose as much as you can, you are ready to go live! ProfHanley (talk) 17:22, 14 November 2023 (UTC)