User talk:Gdcespedes/sandbox

Hello,

Thank you for your peer review. I will definitely take in consideration your suggestions. And to be honest, I never knew that word, "Jews" could be offensive! now I know and won't happen again.

As for your page, I noticed that you have clear structure, relatively balanced coverage and I find your contents neutral. Your sources are reliable, may I suggest that you add a lead section.

Degetsering (talk) 15:12, 15 April 2016 (UTC) Tsering