User talk:Gdegidi

Welcome!
Hello, Gdegidi, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Peer review - Philippa Marrack article
The lead is a bit too detailed. It provides more details about the specifics of her work than are necessary to introduce her as a researcher. The specifics of her research are also not discussed anywhere else in the article. It may be more effective to have a more general lead and discuss the specifics of her research in a separate section. The article could be reorganized. Professional activities is a redundant section heading since the majority of the biography section also discusses professional activities. The awards section seems complete and the references section is strong. Skthoma (talk) 23:08, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

Peer review completed.
Hello Gdegidi, I have completed and posted the peer review for your Wikipedia page! Well done.

Sincerely,

Hyablon — Preceding unsigned comment added by Hyablon (talk • contribs) 02:48, 9 November 2020 (UTC)