User talk:Gecshaw

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Hello, Gecshaw, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Adam and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Peer Review
Overall, I think your plan sounds really strong. All of the sections you’re planning on adding are important to the issue and overlooked by the current article. As some people have pointed out in the talk section of the page, you may want to also consider rewriting the lead. It seems a bit short, biased, and hard to follow. Also, I’m not sure which parts of the article you wrote and which were already there, but you may want to revise some of the more biased language (evaluating whether the health system is good or bad). In addition to issues, it might be interesting to include some more information about cultural perspectives on health/healing in Vietnam—I’m sure there are many anthropological sources to draw from. I’d also be interested in hearing about health-focused NGO’s in Vietnam. Also, maybe you should merge “Healthcare System” with “Providers?” You've picked reliable sources, and your plan sounds organized and coherent. Keep up the good work! Laceyjacoby (talk) 04:13, 18 October 2016 (UTC)