User talk:GemmaBo23

Andy Anson
Hi Gemma, thanks for your interest in sorting out the Andy Anson. I should inform you, however, that Wikipedia requires sources for all contributions, especially regarding living people. Would you be able to provide a source for the changes you're making please? – PeeJay 16:39, 20 July 2017 (UTC)
 * By the way, I should also inform you that Wikipedia has strict policies regarding conflicts of interest. I have reason to suspect that you are Gemma Boyle, and given the info in that LinkedIn profile, that would put you in a position where you have a conflict of interests when it comes to editing the Andy Anson article. – PeeJay 16:41, 20 July 2017 (UTC)
 * I'm sorry, but your contributions simply don't conform to an encyclopaedic tone. A bullet-pointed list of accomplishments is not appropriate here and would be better suited to a CV, not an encyclopaedia. – PeeJay 17:29, 20 July 2017 (UTC)

Thank you for your messages. Please can you advise how I can amend the page further with the correct information. The page was extremely out of date.
 * I realise that it can be frustrating for individuals with Wikipedia pages to have their information be out of date, but I'm afraid there's not much we can do if the subject's activities aren't being reported in the media such that they come into the public eye. If there are news articles about Anson's appointment to various boards, you need to provide those before the information can be included. It would also help to avoid PR speak when it comes to describing the companies he's worked for. Saying that he's "leading the development of an exciting international sports advisory and marketing business" just sounds like it was written by a PR exec with the job to big up his profile; that may or may not be your intent, I'm just telling you what I think. – PeeJay 19:11, 20 July 2017 (UTC)