User talk:GenZFootballManiac

Your submission at Articles for creation: Dominic Morgan-Griffiths (April 7)
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Nthep (talk) 12:22, 7 April 2023 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Dominic Morgan-Griffiths (April 7)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Nthep were:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.


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Nthep (talk) 12:43, 7 April 2023 (UTC)

Ok, you don't like my decline of your submission, I can understand that but you don't get to delete my comments and resubmit hoping that someone else will make a different decision. As the messages above say  You're not making any attempt to address my comments, just trying to ignore them.

In case you don't understand what my concerns are about this article are:
 * 1) is he notable as defined per WP:SPORTBASIC. As far as I can read he's never played at senior level which makes the bar that bit higher.
 * 2) the draft is not written in the tone required for an encyclopedia. Instead it reads like you are writing for his personal website. I'm not going to go through the whole article but from the outset phrases like  and  are not how things need to be written.

I also have concerns about the images you've uploaded. Several are watermarked Elizaveta Kuzenkova which makes me wonder if they are all your own work as claimed. Own work means you created the original image, not that you are the person who uploaded them. Nthep (talk) 13:45, 7 April 2023 (UTC)


 * Hi,
 * My apologies. Delete message? That I did not do.
 * I also changed and have edited the submission since reading message? (So please do take note, i'm absorbing all guidance to a correct posting and it is not as you have perceived initially.)
 * I'm an un-aware on my side where such confusion could have possibly spawned?
 * "is he notable as defined per WP:SPORTBASIC. As far as I can read he's never played at senior level which makes the bar that bit higher." - I genuinely do not understand that in depth, Im aware he has played England 6 aside cups such as Pub-Wembley and is due another Cup appearance.
 * "the draft is not written in the tone required for an encyclopedia. Instead it reads like you are writing for his personal website. I'm not going to go through the whole article but from the outset phrases like has swiftly emerged as one of the most promising and versatile midfielders in English football. and boasts a diverse and extensive club career are not how things need to be written." I have been and are continuing to take approaches to fix such presentation of information. GenZFootballManiac (talk) 13:51, 7 April 2023 (UTC)
 * The lack of coverage of 6-a-side football is probably a good indicator as to the notability of that form of the game. The individual references you've included so far don't help as they are mostly database entries that are discounted per the first bullet point in WP:SPORTBASIC, you need far more in-depth mentions of him to establish his notability. Nthep (talk) 14:30, 7 April 2023 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Dominic Morgan-Griffiths (April 7)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by WikiDan61 were:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Dominic Morgan-Griffiths and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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 * If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:AfC_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Dominic_Morgan-Griffiths Articles for creation help desk], on the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:WikiDan61&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:AfC_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Dominic_Morgan-Griffiths reviewer's talk page] or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

WikiDan61 ChatMe!ReadMe!! 14:36, 7 April 2023 (UTC)

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 20:02, 9 September 2023 (UTC)