User talk:Gen Wood/Availability heuristic/Paytdaddy Peer Review

Thank you for your feedback on my article. I appreciate the time you spent to let me know what you thought could use improvement and what you thought looked good this will help me improve my article. From your feedback I hope to improve the article. Katie critiqued, “the Lead is weak considering how well-developed the rest of the article is and does not summarize the information contained within its sections.” For this I will change the Lead and instead of defining Availability Heuristics describe the different sections contained in the article. Paytdaddy suggested that I find pictures. I think this would help readers understand the article better if they could visually see some of the studies done. Cece noted that there are sections that are in need of more information. I also noted this and plan to find more research in the health sub section or the business sub section. With this feedback I plan to improve the article and make it more aligned with Wikipedia standards. I intend to carefully read each subsection so I can improve the Lead knowing what is in the article. (Gen Wood (talk) 16:31, 29 October 2019 (UTC))