User talk:GeoMedrek/sandbox

This is where the peer review feedback for GeoMedrek's sandbox draft content should be posted. Be sure to sign your post and complete the Canvas quiz to receive credit for your work. UWM.AP.Endo (talk) 15:37, 16 November 2020 (UTC)

Peer Review
Peer review questions

Is the content written in a neutral, unbiased tone? Yes, the content is written in a neutral and unbiased tone. Do the citations follow the MEDRS (Links to an external site.) (medicine, reliable sources) guidelines? Yes, the citations follow the MEDRS guidelines. Are the citations formatted correctly? Yes, the citations are formatted properly. Visit the main article that your classmate is contributing their new content to.

Does it make sense to add this new content to the proposed article? Yes, it would make sense to add this new content to the article. Are there any other areas of the main article that your classmate could contribute to? I think they can also contribute to mentioning a little more history about CaSR.

Shania1451 (talk) 23:18, 22 November 2020 (UTC)Shania Khalid Shania KhalidShania1451 (talk) 23:18, 22 November 2020 (UTC)

Peer Review Questions Is the content written in a neutral, unbiased tone? Yes the content is written in a neutral tone Do the citations follow the MEDRS (Links to an external site.) (medicine, reliable sources) guidelines? Yes they follow the MEDRS guidelines. Are the citations formatted correctly? Yes they are. Visit the main article that your classmate is contributing their new content to.

Does it make sense to add this new content to the proposed article? Yes, the article needs background.

Are there any other areas of the main article that your classmate could contribute to? They could contribute to the mechanism of how the calcium-sensing receptor (CaSR) works? DK201 (talk) 03:57, 23 November 2020 (UTC) Peer review questions

Is the content written in a neutral, unbiased tone? Yes.

Do the citations follow the MEDRS (Links to an external site.) (medicine, reliable sources) guidelines? Yes.

Are the citations formatted correctly? Yes.

Visit the main article that your classmate is contributing their new content to.

Does it make sense to add this new content to the proposed article? I am not able to see the main article.

Are there any other areas of the main article that your classmate could contribute to? I am not able to see the main article.

Bautis35 (talk) 05:12, 23 November 2020 (UTC)