User talk:GeologyGem

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Hello, GeologyGem, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions, especially what you did for Margaret Crosfield. I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Here are a few links to pages you might find helpful: Please remember to sign your messages on talk pages by typing four tildes ( ~ ); this will automatically insert your username and the date. If you need help, check out Questions, ask me on my talk page, or ask your question on this page and then place  before the question. Again, welcome! Katie Chan (WMUK) (talk) 10:06, 4 December 2013 (UTC)
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Suggestions at Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Margaret Chorley Crosfield
Greetings, to speed up getting your draft approved, please address:
 * Some of the sentences lack flow, read more like bullet points: "First woman to be elected...". Try to adjust slightly for narrative style: "She was the first woman to be elected..."
 * Your article needs a clear WP:Lead section which sums up Crosfield in just a sentence or two, noting who/when/where she was and what she's known for
 * Your footnote formatting is good, and the book looks good, but we can't have an article based on a single source. Please find a few other articles or books that discuss her so we can ensure we're getting a cross-section of views about her.

Great start, just needs some tweaking to get approved. MatthewVanitas (talk) 16:07, 4 December 2013 (UTC)