User talk:Geonsoo.kim/sandbox

Hkim856 (talk) 20:16, 18 October 2018 (UTC) This work is by far the most developed draft. Nicely done. One of the next steps would involve adding the existing articles to your content (i.e., musicians, politicians, or anything that you think needs to be redirected to another article). I would also recommend citing your sources. You've already done a pretty good job finding and using the relevant sources, but the 1970s part completely lacks citations. -- HK.

Peer review from Adrienne
Hello!

I found your article to be really well researched, good job! It looks better than the original Korean Rock wiki page already in my opinion. I found the structure you added to the article to be a great improvement, and I think you wrote in a clear and neutral tone! I think one thing you can add right away is some more citations, especially to the 1970's section! One think you could think about adding (but might not be necessary) is more information on what Korean rock sounded like over the years. Were there any tonal shifts? Any trends in rock that led to distinct styles or sounds from each era? Just something to think about! Overall, it is looking really good! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Aeoliva1 (talk • contribs) 19:55, 22 October 2018 (UTC)